View Full Version : Enough betas for now, thanks (60k YA mystery/suspense/thriller)

12-20-2018, 07:32 PM
Hi all.

Thanks so much to anyone who will beta read my YA mystery/suspense/thriller (around 60k). I'm looking for general impressions and big picture thoughts (though all feedback is welcome). What would take the story next level? What kind of a review would you give it? What's missing or boring or what did you hope for that you didn't get? Harsh is fine, though it helps to hear what is working too. Here's the pitch:

A mysterious invitation.
An opportunity to get off the streets and into a mansion.
One condition—they play a game.
But when teens disappear, they must uncover the secret of their invitation to survive.

PM me if interested in beta reading. THANK YOU!!!

01-12-2019, 02:12 AM
I've had enough betas for now, thanks!

01-12-2019, 02:42 AM
Finally got enough unpacking and re-settling done to consider a beta or two (I'll get back to you on e-mail, Dan). Pretty much anything except YA (can't remember back that far), fantasy, or Bedroom preferences. Message me and we'll move to e-mail if it looks like we have mutual directions to go in.