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Hello. I have a question I’m sure someone here can answer.
I have a scene in which my MC is having a tense conversation. There are three people in this scene.
Below are the phrases I’m wondering about. How would you handle the stretch out of the word Steady? For now I’ve put dots between the letters. Unfortunately my Chicago Manual of Style doesn’t address this. It may be one of “up to the author” situations.
Thanks in advance for your help.
Once again Jan ignored her. He checked his watch.
“What else?” he said.
“I’m sorry sir, what else... what?”
“What else do we have nearby? My God woman what have we been talking about!”
“S· t· e· a· d· y Jan, steady,” Joachim warned.
“Aircraft, Phoebe, aircraft.” Jan said. “What else do we have on hand?”
I have a scene in which my MC is having a tense conversation. There are three people in this scene.
Below are the phrases I’m wondering about. How would you handle the stretch out of the word Steady? For now I’ve put dots between the letters. Unfortunately my Chicago Manual of Style doesn’t address this. It may be one of “up to the author” situations.
Thanks in advance for your help.
Once again Jan ignored her. He checked his watch.
“What else?” he said.
“I’m sorry sir, what else... what?”
“What else do we have nearby? My God woman what have we been talking about!”
“S· t· e· a· d· y Jan, steady,” Joachim warned.
“Aircraft, Phoebe, aircraft.” Jan said. “What else do we have on hand?”
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