View Full Version : Need a Beta to Read my historical, Dress Her In Chameleon - 108,000+ WC

11-16-2017, 08:57 PM
Hello! I'm seeking a beta reader for the 10th draft of Dress Her In Chameleon, a Christian Romance novel written out of the religious box. That is, nothing has been whitewashed. The good have flaws, the bad are nasty, and evil walks and talks. It has paranormal elements, sexy scenes, and a bit of rough languageóbut no explicit sex or blasphemy.

Theme: Be sure your sins will find you out.

Setting: 1732 - 34

Locations: Liverpool area, the North Atlantic Ocean, Charles Town, NC, the wilderness, the newly chartered Providence of Georgia.

Plot Sentence: Desperate to escape a parental arranged marriage to Prince Reginald, a man she fears means her harm, Lady Naomi tricks Rev. Joe Owens into elopingóbut the joke is on her.

I want a full, blunt critique, including holes in the plot.