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I just wrote a 500 word scene where one character is treating another for a stab wound to the chest. The knife slipped between the ribs and punctured the lung, bad enough to where the victim was coughing up blood.
The woman treating him has no formal experience. Before the world economy collapsed (i.e. No hospitals or urgent care clinics), she had interned at a vet's office and helped with trauma situations for animals. For the past few months, she's been with an old navy corpsman with combat experience, and they've been involved in a little war in the Midwest, so she's gotten experience that way.
Would anyone with medical knowledge be kind enough to review my scene? I researched it as best as I can, I don't think I'll improve it without additional help. I don't need it to be perfect or super jargony, just plausible enough a surgeon wouldn't toss the book across the room.
The woman treating him has no formal experience. Before the world economy collapsed (i.e. No hospitals or urgent care clinics), she had interned at a vet's office and helped with trauma situations for animals. For the past few months, she's been with an old navy corpsman with combat experience, and they've been involved in a little war in the Midwest, so she's gotten experience that way.
Would anyone with medical knowledge be kind enough to review my scene? I researched it as best as I can, I don't think I'll improve it without additional help. I don't need it to be perfect or super jargony, just plausible enough a surgeon wouldn't toss the book across the room.