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Jamills08
06-21-2017, 11:15 PM
I would love to help someone else that might be in the same place in their writing journey as me. I just completed my second novel (I'm not published) today and I need some help with chracter and plot development because i think it might be confusing. I can send chapter by chapter each week and i assume my partner would do the same. Thats about what i can get done with my other work and kids.

Within The Cleansing Fire is the title as of now. Below is a quick description.

Trent leaves his wife, Makenzie, with the responsibility of a few hefty financial investments. His death is unexpected and suspicious, but so are the investments. His body has departed this life, but his spirit is stuck drifting in and out of Makenzie's as she raises their daughter and finds comfort with his ex-best friend. Trent and Makenzie attempt to find peace and answers to his death.