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josephperin
04-16-2017, 07:30 PM
I need fresh sets of eyes on the first 50. What I specifically need to know is if there are enough clues SOMETHING BAD IS ABOUT TO HAPPEN before the actual inciting incident. Also, if the foreshadowing is enough to hold your interest.

You can either message me or respond to this post, if interested.

Thanks in advance, JP

liritha
04-16-2017, 08:27 PM
Hey, I'd love to help. :) What genre is your MS?

josephperin
04-16-2017, 08:36 PM
Hey, I'd love to help. :) What genre is your MS?

Thriller.

It starts the MCs as teens, but takes them to 30ish by the end of the book.

PMed you

pinkbowvintage
04-20-2017, 11:14 AM
I can give it a read.

josephperin
04-24-2017, 09:10 PM
I can give it a read.

Thank you, Pinkbow.

PMed you.