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Okay, so I send a friend three of my poems -- thought she might be interested.
She writes back, saying she's sent them on to a friend who's a published poet, with a promise of feedback. What an opportunity!
Feedback comes back:
I like them, especially x. Well done.
Here are three of mine. Send feedback.
(poems follow)
Plus a bit about how she also works in other media. She's even got a nom de plume.
Unfortunately, I struggle to find anything good to say about her poems beyond 'very positive'. They're immature in concept and poorly executed: clumsy rhyme, sloppy meter ('sloppy' is perhaps generous), no structure. Even the spelling is poor. Really, maybe fifth-grade stuff. Just amazing.
I've wasted an hour trying to write a reply that is honest, but says something good. I think I'll have to chat with my friend first: "Are you sure she's published? How old is she?"
What a disappointment. What a dilemma.
And what a testament to our own community and the poets here.
She writes back, saying she's sent them on to a friend who's a published poet, with a promise of feedback. What an opportunity!
Feedback comes back:
I like them, especially x. Well done.
Here are three of mine. Send feedback.
(poems follow)
Plus a bit about how she also works in other media. She's even got a nom de plume.
Unfortunately, I struggle to find anything good to say about her poems beyond 'very positive'. They're immature in concept and poorly executed: clumsy rhyme, sloppy meter ('sloppy' is perhaps generous), no structure. Even the spelling is poor. Really, maybe fifth-grade stuff. Just amazing.
I've wasted an hour trying to write a reply that is honest, but says something good. I think I'll have to chat with my friend first: "Are you sure she's published? How old is she?"
What a disappointment. What a dilemma.
And what a testament to our own community and the poets here.