elzoria said:Is having adverbs in a story wrong? Really, really wrong...
trumancoyote said:I friggin' love adverbs.
janetbellinger said:I believe in breaking all the writing rules, even the one about not using adverbs.
pdr said:Please don't worry about the rules and the DON'Ts. Just write your story so that you can find out whose story it is and what you are trying to say.
Then you can re-write to make the story better. But passive voice and adverbs come way down the re-writing list. Save them for when the story and characters are clear and you need to polish for publication.