Hello all. Anyone interested in swapping fiction, feel free to send me a personal message. I'm currently looking to have a 1st draft story looked at. It clocks in at about 4100 words, but I'm willing to critique as much as 7000 words (give or take). My piece is urban horror, and the first three lines are below.
Thanks!
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The angel’s gaze swept over the human skins hanging limply in its closet. Like a businessman choosing the best suit for a power meeting, it sifted through the hollowed out flesh, and decided upon a nineteen-year-old female to slip over its six wings and three faces. The skin tightened on its bulky form, slimming it down until it appeared exactly as the university student had before the angel had kidnapped, strangled, and gutted her.
Thanks!
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The angel’s gaze swept over the human skins hanging limply in its closet. Like a businessman choosing the best suit for a power meeting, it sifted through the hollowed out flesh, and decided upon a nineteen-year-old female to slip over its six wings and three faces. The skin tightened on its bulky form, slimming it down until it appeared exactly as the university student had before the angel had kidnapped, strangled, and gutted her.
