Sorry
I am sorry about that, but you see I am very nervous when it comes to my writing. I guess I was hearing those internet crickets. You know the kind that you hear when someone posts a bad joke. Well anyways, I was hearing them on the thread with my chapters which is not good. So, I took them down for revision. Maybe I'll build my courage up again. Either way, I'll contribute some reviews to other members. Thanks for both the offer tp crit my work and the advice on joining the crit group.