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KCT
12-08-2016, 11:00 AM
Greetings everyone,

I'm looking for someone to beta read my latest short story, The Battle of Dead Raven Moor. (About 2,150 words).

The story is set in medieval times. Feel free to make any comments or suggestions that you may wish to offer.

The first three lines:

One hundred mounted knights of the King's Royal Guard formed a line in the distance. Lord Carrion knew they would soon thunder across the open plain, their deadly intentions focused solely on him. He eyed the wooden spoon in his hand and muttered, "I should've stayed in bed."

Send me a PM with your email address if this might interest you.

Thanks for your time and consideration.