They want the first 10 pages of the book.
Argh! Why don't they say THAT then? As if we writers don't have enough to stress over when hitting send. Thank you, though. That was kind of the answer I figured. I just needed to bounce it off people more experienced.
Personally, the first question in my head would be, "What exactly is wrong with the first ten pages that you'd rather send ten other pages?" If it's something like, "the story doesn't pick up until page 20", then why isn't the book starting at page 20?
To me, the best bet is always to send the first 10, whether "first" is used in the guidelines or not.
No, it's definitely where the story starts. We jump right in with action. But in the first 10 pages there is a...violent(?) sex scene. Consensual, for sure, I don't think there's an issue there, or that it'd need a trigger warning. None of my many betas have said so, or had an issue with it.
I was previously worried about my first pages, but when I workshopped the book at a conference, everyone (including the leader) raved about them. To the point I was thinking maybe they were teasing me and were going to say, "Ha! Just kidding, this opening sucks!" But, turned out they were serious.
Anyway, I guess after so many rejections I was wondering if maybe the first ten were making it seem like the rest of the story was erotic (which it's not) or...I dunno, hindering me in some way when they are the
first pages read.
I thought, well, if they don't care which 10 I send, maybe I'd try an experiment and send a different 10. To see if it garnered a request for more.