with a decidedly feminist slant. While I think the writing itself is fairly clean, I'm looking for a reader who can highlight issues with plot and pacing (pacing is my personal Kryptonite 
). It's in first person, present tense, told from three POVs (which is another issue--I want to make sure the POVs come across as distinct).
Please PM me if you're interested, if you want to see a sample chapter before deciding, etc. And thank you all so much in advance!!!!!!
). It's in first person, present tense, told from three POVs (which is another issue--I want to make sure the POVs come across as distinct). Please PM me if you're interested, if you want to see a sample chapter before deciding, etc. And thank you all so much in advance!!!!!!
