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Does anyone know what mechanical malfunction you could get on a submarine? It needs to be something that's serious, not necessarily going to end up as an all out disaster. I've googled about a bit, but it seems it's the kind of thing they don't write up in great detail - for obvious reasons I suppose.
I have a short story in mind about a navy clerk with OCD, ordering and despatching parts to ships and subs. He's too anxious to do the job properly and sends off some wrong parts, and somewhere in the back of his mind he knows he's done something wrong. That alone wouldn't be enough to cause disaster, but that mistake will interact with a series of maintenance errors, setting up a lurking and growing problem, initially disguised by the subs own override defence systems. I probably don't need too much technical detail because it would swamp the story anyway, but I feel like I can't write it without some notion in the back of my mind of what's happening. It'd be great if anyone could help or point me in the direction of some information.
Many thanks.
I have a short story in mind about a navy clerk with OCD, ordering and despatching parts to ships and subs. He's too anxious to do the job properly and sends off some wrong parts, and somewhere in the back of his mind he knows he's done something wrong. That alone wouldn't be enough to cause disaster, but that mistake will interact with a series of maintenance errors, setting up a lurking and growing problem, initially disguised by the subs own override defence systems. I probably don't need too much technical detail because it would swamp the story anyway, but I feel like I can't write it without some notion in the back of my mind of what's happening. It'd be great if anyone could help or point me in the direction of some information.
Many thanks.