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thisiskortny5
09-26-2016, 09:10 PM
I have the first 6 chapters of my WiP that I would love feedback on. It's literary it terms of writing and i consider it categorized as Adult based on language used (or maybe YA crossover). It's about a teenage girl who comes across a group of people in her small town that call themselves a coven. It's a contemporary, so no real magic or any fantasy elements. Its set in 1994. I'll gladly do a switch if someone has a similar world count, and I'm really wanting to find someone who knows and enjoy Literary Fiction writing.

EvieDriver
09-26-2016, 10:43 PM
I'm a professional Editor, and I'd love to have a pass if that would help you! I'd include comments, but nothing too negative. My criticism will never cross that threshold. If I run into something problematic, I include a way you could either work it in a bit differently or maybe something to replace it. PM me if interested. I don't have anything remotely near 20k, but I'm nearly at 6k. I'm not too sure if it is ready to be sent off or not. Just thought I'd offer.

thisiskortny5
09-26-2016, 10:53 PM
I'm a professional Editor, and I'd love to have a pass if that would help you! I'd include comments, but nothing too negative. My criticism will never cross that threshold. If I run into something problematic, I include a way you could either work it in a bit differently or maybe something to replace it. PM me if interested. I don't have anything remotely near 20k, but I'm nearly at 6k. I'm not too sure if it is ready to be sent off or not. Just thought I'd offer.

I'll send you a private message.

EvieDriver
09-26-2016, 11:03 PM
I sent you an email, please check it! :)

EvieDriver
09-26-2016, 11:36 PM
Ready for your manuscript when possible. :)