View Full Version : Beta reader sought for erotic short (historical M/F)

Susannah Shepherd
09-26-2016, 12:54 PM
I'm looking for a beta reader for an erotic short story (4350 words) set in 6th century Byzantine/Roman empire. It's M/F, explicit but vanilla content - no triggers or kinks. It's on its third draft and shouldn't contain any basic errors. (The piece is the same one that is up on Erotica SYW but it's too long to get much feedback there).

I am happy to return the favour on short pieces of erotica or romance but can't commit to beta read anything longer at the moment.

I'm working to a deadline on this one so would need feedback by 17 October. PM me your email address if you're interested and I will send the version that has been redrafted since it was posted in SYW.


Cobalt Jade
09-26-2016, 08:18 PM
I've written erotica for 20 years, I would love to take a look!

09-26-2016, 09:47 PM
I'm preparing for some travel, but it'll all be over before your deadline. Depending on how things shake out once I'm home again (the last two times we traveled, I came home sick), I'd be interested--if you still need readers that close to your deadline. If not, there's always next time.

Susannah Shepherd
09-27-2016, 10:36 AM
Thanks all for the offers - Maryn, I may get back to you later.