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I would love a high-level beta read to help me find where I need to tone my saggy middle.
I think the first 40k and the last 30k are okay, but the 18k-ish in the middle is bothering me. I'm very willing to cut what needs to go; I just can't identify it!
It's fully edited and my agent has also done a read over, so it should be pretty free of typos and errors. I don't think it will be a heavy duty beta read for anyone kind of enough to offer.
Thank you to those who read an earlier version and made the work stronger.
Here's a link to an early version of Chapter 1 in Share Your Work, so you can see if you could put up with my writing
http://absolutewrite.com/forums/sho...(1870-words)&p=9737567&viewfull=1#post9737567
I think the first 40k and the last 30k are okay, but the 18k-ish in the middle is bothering me. I'm very willing to cut what needs to go; I just can't identify it!
It's fully edited and my agent has also done a read over, so it should be pretty free of typos and errors. I don't think it will be a heavy duty beta read for anyone kind of enough to offer.
Thank you to those who read an earlier version and made the work stronger.
Here's a link to an early version of Chapter 1 in Share Your Work, so you can see if you could put up with my writing
http://absolutewrite.com/forums/sho...(1870-words)&p=9737567&viewfull=1#post9737567