French Translation?

Cindyt · Sep 12, 2016

I need just a bit:

#1) Not my beautiful redhead, but in a pinch, sweet still.

#2) Ah, my beautiful redhead, the one I have longed for. You will be mine soon and then your sweet meat will feed the sharks.

AW Admin · Sep 12, 2016

There's someone here who's a professional French translator; I'll try to remember who it is.

Meanwhile, think about the level of formality you want; colloquial slang? Rude? Courteous?

Possibly post in the International section?

Cindyt · Sep 12, 2016

AW Admin said:
There's someone here who's a professional French translator; I'll try to remember who it is.

Meanwhile, think about the level of formality you want; colloquial slang? Rude? Courteous?

Possibly post in the International section?

A serial killer wrote it. I'm thinking slang. Thanks.

Raindrop · Sep 13, 2016

Cindyt said:
I need just a bit:

#1) Not my beautiful redhead, but in a pinch, sweet still.
C'est pas ma jolie rouquine, mais à défaut, c'est sympa, quand même.

#2) Ah, my beautiful redhead, the one I have longed for. You will be mine soon and then your sweet meat will feed the sharks.
Ah, ma jolie rouquine, celle que j'ai tant attendu. Tu seras à moi dans pas longtemps, et je donnerai ta douce chair à bouffer aux requins.

Not a French translator, so uh, ask for a 2nd advice. I'm French. It's not very slangy, because the original isn't so I wasn't sure -- the slangiest term in there is "bouffer".
"sympa" means nice, not sweet.
It still sounds like translated French, lol! You'd think I'd do better, it being my first language and all.

Cindyt · Sep 13, 2016

Raindrop said:
Not a French translator, so uh, ask for a 2nd advice. I'm French. It's not very slangy, because the original isn't so I wasn't sure -- the slangiest term in there is "bouffer".
"sympa" means nice, not sweet.
It still sounds like translated French, lol! You'd think I'd do better, it being my first language and all.

It's an improvement over an online translator app. Thank you so much! You're an angel!

Raindrop · Sep 13, 2016

Ooops I made a grammar mistake!!! It's "celle que j'ai tant attendue". Good thing I'm travelling to France in two days time, I seriously need a refresher course!

Cindyt said:
It's an improvement over an online translator app. Thank you so much! You're an angel!

If you look at just the right time, yes. :tongue

Thanks!

Cindyt · Sep 13, 2016

Raindrop said:
Ooops I made a grammar mistake!!! It's "celle que j'ai tant attendue". Good thing I'm travelling to France in two days time, I seriously need a refresher course!

If you look at just the right time, yes. Thanks!

Noted. Thanks again.

French Translation?

Cindyt

Gettin wiggy wit it

AW Admin

Cindyt

Gettin wiggy wit it

Raindrop

Cindyt

Gettin wiggy wit it

Raindrop

Cindyt

Gettin wiggy wit it