Hello, writers, readers and everything in-between.
I'm at the point in my novel's life where I'd benefit immensely from an outsider's perspective.
My novel has the working title of The Enduring (but I may also end up calling it Bruce Alford and the Trajorn Rite), is just under 72k words and is a Sci-fi Adventure. I'm unafraid of harsh criticisms and am hoping for people who can show me what's working and what isn't, what's confusing and where the story is moving too fast/ too slow.
A short blurb:
The Enduring drops out-of-shape actor, Bruce Alford, into an alien tournament of cunning, endurance and strength. If Bruces fails, he dies, and so does earth.
I would also be interested in beta swapping with a work of similar length and genre.
Thanks for reading!
I'm at the point in my novel's life where I'd benefit immensely from an outsider's perspective.
My novel has the working title of The Enduring (but I may also end up calling it Bruce Alford and the Trajorn Rite), is just under 72k words and is a Sci-fi Adventure. I'm unafraid of harsh criticisms and am hoping for people who can show me what's working and what isn't, what's confusing and where the story is moving too fast/ too slow.
A short blurb:
The Enduring drops out-of-shape actor, Bruce Alford, into an alien tournament of cunning, endurance and strength. If Bruces fails, he dies, and so does earth.
I would also be interested in beta swapping with a work of similar length and genre.
Thanks for reading!
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