View Full Version : Horror Short Story - 10K - Vampire Fiction

08-03-2016, 06:01 PM
Seeking beta-reader for completed horror short story. [10,000 words]

Style similar to Stephen King or Dean Koontz - modern day contemporary horror [vampire] fiction with a regional slant set in a small South Jersey shore community.

General overall feedback. I'm planning on self-publishing this story in a collection of short stories and putting on Amazon.

Would love a beta-reader to give opinion, overall impression and identify any possible problems or inconsistencies in plot.

08-03-2016, 06:15 PM
If you just want general over all feedback, I'm your guy. I'm terrible with grammar and the like, so you'd need someone else for that. I can catch typos and spelling errors, however.

Also, since you only have two posts, and your account is definitely no more than three days old (See my math skillz) I would recommend interacting with the forum on a bigger level before asking favors. I only responded here because I'm all over vampire stories like white on rice.

08-03-2016, 06:29 PM
Hi Nate

Thank you for your quick reply and advice. :) I will forward story to you, forthwith!


08-03-2016, 10:05 PM
I'll take a look, if you want to PM it to me on here.

08-04-2016, 01:50 AM
I have a horror story too if you want to swap. Let me know.

08-04-2016, 02:03 AM
Definitely! I'll PM you with my email!

Keyboard Cowboy
08-08-2016, 01:15 AM
I'll give it a read as well. I'm a big Stephen King fan =)

08-08-2016, 04:30 PM
Much appreciated! I'll PM you!