I just thought of a new feature of my new space opera setting, and I would appreciate some opinions.
The setting is one with easy space travel, in kilometres-long warships, plasma guns, swords, mysticism, supernatural evil, and little regard for actual science.
The new feature is one I'm planning to keep in the background for now, but maybe do more with later. It's an ancient, extinct order of do-gooders with supernatural powers, and if I do go ahead with my idea there will be a story dedicated to restoring the order.
I was pondering possible names and came up with "Saints of Luana", or "Knights of Luana".
Does this all sound too similar to the Jedi? I want to go with the "Knights" name, as it fits the culture, but of course the full Jedi title is "Jedi Knight".
I'll be upfront: The whole idea IS inspired by the Jedi, and my desire to do my own version of them to make the setting more colourful. My guys don't wield energy swords, but I'm still wondering where the line is between inspiration and ripoff, especially with a such a well-known thing.
Thoughts?
The setting is one with easy space travel, in kilometres-long warships, plasma guns, swords, mysticism, supernatural evil, and little regard for actual science.
The new feature is one I'm planning to keep in the background for now, but maybe do more with later. It's an ancient, extinct order of do-gooders with supernatural powers, and if I do go ahead with my idea there will be a story dedicated to restoring the order.
I was pondering possible names and came up with "Saints of Luana", or "Knights of Luana".
Does this all sound too similar to the Jedi? I want to go with the "Knights" name, as it fits the culture, but of course the full Jedi title is "Jedi Knight".
I'll be upfront: The whole idea IS inspired by the Jedi, and my desire to do my own version of them to make the setting more colourful. My guys don't wield energy swords, but I'm still wondering where the line is between inspiration and ripoff, especially with a such a well-known thing.
Thoughts?