Synopsis:
In a world where dreams are heavily policed, Josh wakes up to two things: a strange blue demon
at the foot of his bed who calls itself a 'Dream Thief'. And that he is now the second most wanted
terrorist in the country, and wanted by The Rembrancers - The Dream Police.
Now he's running for his life, accompanied by a supernatural creature, for a dream he doesn't
remember having, but is apparently the entire key to both The Dream Thieves, The Rembrancers,
and Benjamin, a sudden ally, and The Rembrancers No.1 most wanted.
*****
Hey guys! Thanks for checking this out. This is a short novella I plan on self-publishing for free as
soon as possible, and I need as many beta-readers as possible.
At this stage I'm looking less for line-edits (though, who am I kidding, I need that too), and more
for plot-holes, characters, motivations - the general 'did you like it?' 'What didn't you like?' 'What
could be improved?'
But a main concern is plot-holes, and if it all makes sense, and if you understand everything
coming out of it. If you still have questions about how things occurred, or why certain things
couldn't occur, I really need to know. Thanks guys!
If you'd like to read the first chapter to see if it's to your liking then click below.
First Chapter
If you're interested in beta reading the entire novella please email me at jake.ratcliff(at)hotmail.co.uk
Thank you!
In a world where dreams are heavily policed, Josh wakes up to two things: a strange blue demon
at the foot of his bed who calls itself a 'Dream Thief'. And that he is now the second most wanted
terrorist in the country, and wanted by The Rembrancers - The Dream Police.
Now he's running for his life, accompanied by a supernatural creature, for a dream he doesn't
remember having, but is apparently the entire key to both The Dream Thieves, The Rembrancers,
and Benjamin, a sudden ally, and The Rembrancers No.1 most wanted.
*****
Hey guys! Thanks for checking this out. This is a short novella I plan on self-publishing for free as
soon as possible, and I need as many beta-readers as possible.
At this stage I'm looking less for line-edits (though, who am I kidding, I need that too), and more
for plot-holes, characters, motivations - the general 'did you like it?' 'What didn't you like?' 'What
could be improved?'
But a main concern is plot-holes, and if it all makes sense, and if you understand everything
coming out of it. If you still have questions about how things occurred, or why certain things
couldn't occur, I really need to know. Thanks guys!
If you'd like to read the first chapter to see if it's to your liking then click below.
First Chapter
If you're interested in beta reading the entire novella please email me at jake.ratcliff(at)hotmail.co.uk
Thank you!