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KTC
12-17-2015, 06:36 PM
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William Haskins
12-18-2015, 04:20 AM
a masterful buildup on intensity with a delicious gutpunch of an ending.

well done.

Magdalen
12-18-2015, 08:04 AM
Agree with William & add that I so enjoyed the opening lines I dare say they bear repeating - it ups the creep factor for me, for sure!! Quite nice to read on return, as well, even prepared this still packs a chill!!

Neither in darkness,

nor in the brightening
of this spiteful day

will I leave you…

not just yet, my love.

Sarita
12-18-2015, 08:09 AM
Wow, Kev. This is intense and chilling. That's for sharing.