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I'm currently plotting a fantasy novel that is technologically/scientifically about mid-18th century, and one of the characters is shot, so I thought I would do some research. From what I've found so far, the odds of his death are about 99.999999%, but it's an important plot point both because it shows both the lengths the antagonist is willing to take and because the other characters who ultimately save him become important again a while later. So all the details of the scene may have to completely change for him to survive and meet these people, but here are the details I have so far.
The antagonist had a Queen Anne's pistol loaded with a lead ball and the shot is in the side/abdomen (this isn't set in stone, but I'm still not sure about where a better place would be), and they were standing only a few feet apart because they where having a conversation and the MC at this point still trusted the antagonist. The nearest people were about a mile away, and although one of them would possibly know something about how to react, as he'd been in a war or two, as had his father, I'm not sure if they would have/rely that much scientific knowledge on what to do as much as, say, what a medicine man taught them to believe, neither of them being surgeons or even literate. On that note, the nearest surgeon would be in the nearby city, but the quickest way to reach it would be by boat the next day (as the shooting happened at nine or ten pm), if they even convinced a surgeon to come upstream.
I've considered changing the weapon to a knife, but from what I understand that's just as difficult to recover from, infection is just as likely, and then no one would even know he was there except by completely unlikely happenstance, as the area is extremely low traffic. I'm aiming for believeability, so I'm not sure if this would work out in the end or if I need to just scrap this idea and find a new way for the characters/readers to realize how far the antagonist is willing to go to achieve his goals and for the MC to interact with the aforementioned characters.
Hopefully that wasn't very confusing. I'm not sure I organized my questions very well. In any case, I want to say thank you in advance for stopping by to help me out with this.
The antagonist had a Queen Anne's pistol loaded with a lead ball and the shot is in the side/abdomen (this isn't set in stone, but I'm still not sure about where a better place would be), and they were standing only a few feet apart because they where having a conversation and the MC at this point still trusted the antagonist. The nearest people were about a mile away, and although one of them would possibly know something about how to react, as he'd been in a war or two, as had his father, I'm not sure if they would have/rely that much scientific knowledge on what to do as much as, say, what a medicine man taught them to believe, neither of them being surgeons or even literate. On that note, the nearest surgeon would be in the nearby city, but the quickest way to reach it would be by boat the next day (as the shooting happened at nine or ten pm), if they even convinced a surgeon to come upstream.
I've considered changing the weapon to a knife, but from what I understand that's just as difficult to recover from, infection is just as likely, and then no one would even know he was there except by completely unlikely happenstance, as the area is extremely low traffic. I'm aiming for believeability, so I'm not sure if this would work out in the end or if I need to just scrap this idea and find a new way for the characters/readers to realize how far the antagonist is willing to go to achieve his goals and for the MC to interact with the aforementioned characters.
Hopefully that wasn't very confusing. I'm not sure I organized my questions very well. In any case, I want to say thank you in advance for stopping by to help me out with this.