Okay, I've been spit-balling, kicking around a few ideas regarding my book-in-progress. I've had the idea that, well, one of my characters remembers her twin brother fondly, but that after he hit his head after falling out of a tree, his personality changed and not for the better. He was always somewhat reckless and impatient, but he had limits; he'd sometimes be insensitive, but wouldn't be outright cruel. After the fall...it probably didn't help that their father, who had grown increasingly distrustful of doctors after his wife died from cancer, didn't take his son to a hospital, deciding to treat him at home. My character, privately disagreed with said decision, but she was ten and lacked the will needed to go against her papa. So she just prayed as her brother languished for days. I have the idea that while he was sick, he developed a high fever, but am not entirely sure whether that would work with a head injury or not. Tried doing some research on Google to educate myself somewhat (I have no medical background but I still want my stories to have a degree of plausibility), but am still not sure.
Just that after her brother recovers from his injuries/fever, basically he starts demonstrating sociopathic tendencies. Growing up off the grid, she and he had grown up hunting in the woods, but she starts to notice that for him, it's not really so much about the hunt, more about inflicting suffering on creatures smaller than him. He seems to delight in hurting things afterwards. She keeps hoping that things will go back to what they used to be, but as you probably guessed...yeah, things aren't going to end well.
But I thought before I waste too much time and energy, I should check with the good people here and make sure my stuff has a veneer of plausibility. So talk: is the scenario I sketched out semi-plausible or am I full of shit? Feel free to tell me if I am full of shit, but understand that I don't have a medical background. So in other words, if you're going to explain it to me, explain it to me like I'm stupid because I am.
Also, while I'm not going to waste too much time giving specific technical details (because chances are, I will likely get stuff wrong, which will irritate the readers who do know stuff, or I'll bore the readers senseless), I would like to be able to describe said symptoms a little bit more than just "Fell out of a tree, hit his head, and developed a bad fever afterwards."
Just that after her brother recovers from his injuries/fever, basically he starts demonstrating sociopathic tendencies. Growing up off the grid, she and he had grown up hunting in the woods, but she starts to notice that for him, it's not really so much about the hunt, more about inflicting suffering on creatures smaller than him. He seems to delight in hurting things afterwards. She keeps hoping that things will go back to what they used to be, but as you probably guessed...yeah, things aren't going to end well.
But I thought before I waste too much time and energy, I should check with the good people here and make sure my stuff has a veneer of plausibility. So talk: is the scenario I sketched out semi-plausible or am I full of shit? Feel free to tell me if I am full of shit, but understand that I don't have a medical background. So in other words, if you're going to explain it to me, explain it to me like I'm stupid because I am.
Also, while I'm not going to waste too much time giving specific technical details (because chances are, I will likely get stuff wrong, which will irritate the readers who do know stuff, or I'll bore the readers senseless), I would like to be able to describe said symptoms a little bit more than just "Fell out of a tree, hit his head, and developed a bad fever afterwards."