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Magdalen
09-16-2015, 05:25 AM
As Wednesday recedes, rear-view
mirror visions blink purple-lightning
strikes flashes and awe homage
her spirit; here brief, but solemn

(held in trust & faithfully set down
beneath a vivid blue September sky where
deeply shaded doubts dare not lurk)

moments serenade souls,
by definition built for eternity,
future storms and showers, those who

Wednesdays-ever-after will still
recall modes-and-tones-harmonic
mingled with echoes from eleventh hour
mourning bells tolled, in memory
enshrined,
sealed between us,

forever more.





In Memoriam
MPSO





This was written in remembrance of a fine woman.

William Haskins
09-16-2015, 05:29 AM
a stunning elegy, magdalen.

Kylabelle
09-16-2015, 05:32 AM
Oh wonderful. Rings my ribcage, Mags.

Magdalen
09-16-2015, 05:35 AM
Thank you.

Steppe
09-16-2015, 07:06 AM
The fourth stanza is just beautiful Mag. I do love reading your poems!

Stew21
09-17-2015, 07:07 PM
what a fluid read this is.

beautiful work, Magdalen.

Just beautiful.
thanks for sharing it.

Ambrosia
09-17-2015, 07:53 PM
You did wonderfully, Mags. :Hug2:

danaberrywrites
09-18-2015, 08:52 AM
Stunning. Nice flow.

Magdalen
09-19-2015, 03:48 AM
Thank You.
Grief is a weird thing.