I have done several edits of this work as well as working edits and editing passes after 2 beta reads (1 family member, 1 beta on here). It is pretty polished. I am looking for someone to give me general notes on my book. Does it flow well, characters well developed, believable story line, no giant leaps, plot holes etc?
After her mother's unexpected death, Jess is sent to live with Grams, her maternal grandmother. While there, Jess discovers a pathway to the land of Avyron where she meets odd creatures and the forest's beauty takes her mind off of her loss. On one of her visits to the magical land, she finds out that Sorcerer Graygin is relentlessly searching for her and is killing the forest animals in his search. Jess is determined to save the forest creatures and to do it, she will have to surrender to Graygin before there is nothing left to save.
I am happy to swap manuscripts. I don't do erotica or horror, but most anything else is okay. If sending me historical fiction, I won't be able to point out time period mistakes, because that is not my strength. I am good at editing and proof reading, though. Please respond on here or PM to arrange a swap. Thanks in advance.
Jennifer
After her mother's unexpected death, Jess is sent to live with Grams, her maternal grandmother. While there, Jess discovers a pathway to the land of Avyron where she meets odd creatures and the forest's beauty takes her mind off of her loss. On one of her visits to the magical land, she finds out that Sorcerer Graygin is relentlessly searching for her and is killing the forest animals in his search. Jess is determined to save the forest creatures and to do it, she will have to surrender to Graygin before there is nothing left to save.
I am happy to swap manuscripts. I don't do erotica or horror, but most anything else is okay. If sending me historical fiction, I won't be able to point out time period mistakes, because that is not my strength. I am good at editing and proof reading, though. Please respond on here or PM to arrange a swap. Thanks in advance.
Jennifer