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Montana, present day
I'm trying to set up a situation in which a character would be tempted to act as a vigilante because the criminal justice system has failed.
I want my character to know another character killed a prostitute, and it isn't the first time. But there's no real proof - in fact, there's fairly persuasive proof that someone else did it (because the real killer framed him). I want my character to consider vigilantism because the killer is leaving the state, and my character believes the killer will kill someone else in his new location (wherever that may be).
This motive will be somewhat weakened if there's an efficient system of communication between police forces regarding people merely suspected of crimes, with no arrests or charges laid. My character is a sheriff's deputy, used to work as a homicide detective in LA, and he has contacts with various federal law enforcement agencies. So if there's a database or other system he could use, he would probably know about it.
Right now, he just knows that the killer is leaving town. He has no idea where he's going, so he wouldn't be able to call ahead and warn the police there. The killer has two school-aged kids, and my character will have traced a previous town for them based on the kids' school records, so it's possible he could find out where they're moving to by asking the school to tell him where the records are transferred to, but I'm going to try to set it up so the killer just takes the records himself, without the school's permission or knowledge.
So - would my character be able to warn others about this killer, or would it be out of his hands once the guy leaves the state?
Thanks for any help!
I'm trying to set up a situation in which a character would be tempted to act as a vigilante because the criminal justice system has failed.
I want my character to know another character killed a prostitute, and it isn't the first time. But there's no real proof - in fact, there's fairly persuasive proof that someone else did it (because the real killer framed him). I want my character to consider vigilantism because the killer is leaving the state, and my character believes the killer will kill someone else in his new location (wherever that may be).
This motive will be somewhat weakened if there's an efficient system of communication between police forces regarding people merely suspected of crimes, with no arrests or charges laid. My character is a sheriff's deputy, used to work as a homicide detective in LA, and he has contacts with various federal law enforcement agencies. So if there's a database or other system he could use, he would probably know about it.
Right now, he just knows that the killer is leaving town. He has no idea where he's going, so he wouldn't be able to call ahead and warn the police there. The killer has two school-aged kids, and my character will have traced a previous town for them based on the kids' school records, so it's possible he could find out where they're moving to by asking the school to tell him where the records are transferred to, but I'm going to try to set it up so the killer just takes the records himself, without the school's permission or knowledge.
So - would my character be able to warn others about this killer, or would it be out of his hands once the guy leaves the state?
Thanks for any help!