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Finished Short Story - Needs Edits/Readers/Tidyness & More!

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Melanii

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So I just finished my first ever story, though it's short. I wrote it for a contest that was just awesomely extended until the 17th of this month. This means I have 5 days to get it better shape.

Here's what I want to deal with with before the due date:


  • Spelling & Grammar
  • Fixing of sentences, descriptions, and awkward wordings
  • Advice on improvements that won't take long to utilize
  • Suggestions for story title - quite important for a contest

The word count is 1923 and the genre is fantasy.

Please let me know if you want to help! Thanks!
 

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If you'd like an extra set of eyes, I'd be happy to check SPaG. Feel free to shoot me a PM.
 
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