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Of course, I'd always be willing to return the favor.
My story is about 81,000 words and I'm about done with the third round of editing. I'm in need of people who don't have any reason (like family/friends) to butter things up to me. I'm not asking for you to tell me, 'YOUR BOOK SUCKS,' because that's not helpful. If I need room to improve, which I'm sure i do, please tell me why. I'm a big boy. I can take it.
Story: Oscar Winter is a 17 year old high school student. He's suspended from school. He's grounded at home. He found out that he impregnated his on again / off again girlfriend and now his father's been murdered. These issues are the least of his concerns now that his father's killer is now out to get him. Little does Oscar know that his life plays a large role as the forces of good and evil collide. The kingdoms of heaven and hell are brewing a battle, and Earth is being dragged into the middle!
EDIT: BUMP - I need more betas! I'm more than willing to read yours as well!
My story is about 81,000 words and I'm about done with the third round of editing. I'm in need of people who don't have any reason (like family/friends) to butter things up to me. I'm not asking for you to tell me, 'YOUR BOOK SUCKS,' because that's not helpful. If I need room to improve, which I'm sure i do, please tell me why. I'm a big boy. I can take it.
Story: Oscar Winter is a 17 year old high school student. He's suspended from school. He's grounded at home. He found out that he impregnated his on again / off again girlfriend and now his father's been murdered. These issues are the least of his concerns now that his father's killer is now out to get him. Little does Oscar know that his life plays a large role as the forces of good and evil collide. The kingdoms of heaven and hell are brewing a battle, and Earth is being dragged into the middle!
EDIT: BUMP - I need more betas! I'm more than willing to read yours as well!
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