- Joined
- Sep 20, 2013
- Messages
- 3,076
- Reaction score
- 557
One drugged beer and a quick nap later, Dane wake up handcuffed in the trunk of a car. Salem isn't human--he's a vampire--and he needs a steady food supply to stay sane. Dane gets that--really, he does--but doesn't intend to spend the rest of his life as Salem's pet.
Psychological torture! Antiheroes! Gunfights! Perverted nonsense! I’m seeking additional betas for my 60k romance novel, PISTOL X SHOTGUN.
What I’m looking for: people who can help me improve my craft. Stylistic comments, characterization problems, which parts of the story are boring, which parts are exciting. The story is polished, but I'm open to any comments. A quick warning: the story features explicit sex and violence.
What I can do for you: I’m nothing special, but I’m a thorough critique partner. In the past, I've helped with YA, paranormal, fantasy, contemporary romance, and science fiction.
I think I have all I need. Thanks very much.
Last edited: