View Full Version : The evolution of an improved writer

08-03-2004, 01:57 AM
Improved, but not there yet.

I asked for and received help from numerous people here at Absolute Water Cooler and although I am not close to being a good writer I am so much improved. I was amazed at how technically bad my works were until I got some pointers.

Check this thread:

link (http://p197.ezboard.com/fabsolutewritefrm31.showMessage?topicID=141.topic)

There are many complaints in the Mentoring Board. I donít know how much deserved they are but I felt enough about the quality to write the following:

link (http://p197.ezboard.com/fabsolutewritefrm21.showMessage?topicID=60.topic)

If you can take this frankness, you cannot help but improved.

Good luck.

PS: I am writing this in the middle of a serious storm. I got to go, I donít have time to edit it lol

08-03-2004, 10:08 PM
you do just love to reduce me to :cry , doncha, kid!?... i know you won't believe this, but you've left me speechless...

hope the storm leaves you dry, but not 'high and...'

love and triple hugs, maia

08-03-2004, 11:10 PM

Thanks, as always, for the laughs...

(And the very good advice. Perhaps Ray should paste the first piece to the top of the SYW board.)

MacAl Stone
08-04-2004, 06:41 AM
:clap hear, hear.