When I'm writing a scene that involves an injury or a painful experience for a character, I have a hard time trying to figure how it should be described. Now, I have experienced pain, of course, but the one experience I need (the breaking of a bone) happened so long ago that I can't actually remember the sensation of the pain, only the screaming and the furor afterword.
Now, the fact that I was screaming says something about the pain, but I was also 6, so...
Is there anyone who has broken a bone *as an adult* and remembers what the pain is like, who wouldn't mind describing it? I reread my writing all the time, and feel I'm either under- or over-doing it on the description, when all I want is to be accurate.
Now, the fact that I was screaming says something about the pain, but I was also 6, so...
Is there anyone who has broken a bone *as an adult* and remembers what the pain is like, who wouldn't mind describing it? I reread my writing all the time, and feel I'm either under- or over-doing it on the description, when all I want is to be accurate.