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LaVerneRoss
07-09-2004, 01:31 PM
I have never had one, so this is new to me. I write various kinds of books. Western, horror, romance, action/adventure. :love For me writing is like having to breath, must do it every day. need some advice how to make my books better, sellable.
LaVerne

mammamaia
07-10-2004, 03:36 AM

MrAngelwithnowings
08-04-2004, 01:40 PM
Hi,

I'm attempting to write my first book..an autobiography.

After reading some posts here I went back and re-edited it.

It still looks kind of...plain

Its powerful but it doesnt have descriptive words or that "flow" does it matter as much as the content if i'm writing my past?

its choppy when i read it. maybe its just me

mammamaia
08-04-2004, 08:29 PM
if you'd like some one-on-one help with this, angelman, drop me a line and we'll see if we click, ok?

love and hugs, maia
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