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MrAngelwithnowings
08-04-2004, 01:41 PM
Hi,

I'm attempting to write my first book..an autobiography.

After reading some posts here I went back and re-edited it.

It still looks kind of...plain

Its powerful but it doesnt have descriptive words or that "flow" does it matter as much as the content if i'm writing my past?

its choppy when i read it. maybe its just me

mammamaia
08-04-2004, 08:30 PM
if you'd like some one-on-one help with this, angelman, drop me a line and we'll see if we click, ok?

love and hugs, maia
[see contact info on website below]

Yeshanu
08-04-2004, 09:48 PM
Its powerful but it doesnt have descriptive words or that "flow" does it matter as much as the content if i'm writing my past?

It does if you want to get it published at a reputable house. If you're only writing it for yourself and a few friends, then do whatever pleases you.

Oh, and welcome to the forum, Mr. Angel.

MrAngelwithnowings
08-04-2004, 10:16 PM
thanks mammamaia

i just emailed you

i hope you can help me