Agents are increasingly requesting emailed queries. Some even say they only read emailed queries. What are their important features?
Everything between "Dear" and "Sincerely" should be the same.
Their important features are that you save time, paper, ink, and stamps by sending out a query via e-mail instead of via snail mail. You don't have any header before "Dear [Agent Name]" and you put contact info after your (typed) signature.
Everything between "Dear" and "Sincerely" should be the same.
I'm puzzling about how queries have changed recently, mostly. And how that effects me since I've just started the process. Here are some thoughts which came to me this afternoon.
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That's all pretty scary. Makes me want to forget all about finding an agent. How can I distinguish myself when I surely have lots of brilliant competition, and so little space in which to do it?
Never thought it was. If anything I've the impression it makes it harder on us since we have more queries competing for agents' attention. I suspect agents more & more are quicker to reject queries, not because they are sadists but because they have so much on their plates. I recently read a short diary of an agent & the workload she described would kill me!The increasing use of smartphones is not an issue which you can manipulate to your favour. Nor is the increasing number of queries which agents receive.
It didn't help answer my specific question. But just reviewing the material (which I've seen elsewhere several times) was useful reinforcement of the basics. It's rarely a waste of time to return to basics. Which includes the following advice....you've said you've looked at the stickies in QLH and they didn't help you: what more do you want, specifically?
Take it in little bites, and make it personal. Don't try to work it all out in one go: write your book first, then revise it, then write your query. And don't worry about all those thousands of queries every agent receives every week: worry about yours.
The query always had to hook them, and authors should be spending just as long on developing the query itself, even though [nowadays] the process of sending it (and opening it and replying to it) is easier.
How can I distinguish myself when I surely have lots of brilliant competition, and so little space in which to do it?
I'd advise, unless told otherwise, to submit your work in PDF format, especially if you've got funky characters going on there (i.e. Fantasy names using characters outside your standard A-Z) or illustrations.
Other than that, the only difference is the e-mail itself. If you're attaching a cover letter you can be really succinct about this:
Dear [whoever],
Please find attached my cover letter and sample chapters for my novel [title, word count]. [Brief sentence on what it's about].
Yours Faithfully/Sincerely,
[Name]
[Contact info]
A couple of years ago, when I was new to querying, I thought that since agents receive so many email queries, surely sending more postal queries would make sure my query got the attention it deserved!
Ha. I didn't get any better response to postal queries. I did, however, waste time, money, and paper. Because ultimately the manuscripts weren't strong enough.
Write a great manuscript. Write a great query. Follow the agent's guidelines for querying.
I'd advise, unless told otherwise, to submit your work in PDF format, especially if you've got funky characters going on there (i.e. Fantasy names using characters outside your standard A-Z) or illustrations.
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