View Full Version : Help, please

Samantha Porter
10-19-2004, 04:04 AM
I was wondering if anyone had the time to read over something for me. Itís not what youíd normally find on this board, itís a college application essay. The reason Iím asking is that I was home schooled and am also few years removed from my schooling, so I donít really have anyone else who can help me. There's no real personal info on it, like my address or real name, just my story.

College apps has become so competitive (thereís actually a site that charges a couple hundred dollars to read and critique your essayóIíd love to be able to do that, but I just canít) and Iím afraid of sending anything out that hasnít been looked over by a keen eye.

Itís not long, about 600 words or so (for now), and Iíd just like an opinion on the general flow and coherence of it.


aka eraser
10-21-2004, 09:25 AM
Samantha, check your EZBoard message box. I sent you my contact info. Unless you're already flooded with offers I can take a look at your essay.