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I'm looking for a handful of beta readers to give me feedback on a twisted short story I have written. If you are a fan of Roald Dahl's twisted short stories like Kiss Kiss and Lamb to the slaughter and other stories you'll probably have a greater appreciation for this kind of dark drama.
The story is told from the perspective of an elderly man who is on his deathbed, who makes a shocking confession to his grandson about what happened one fateful night to his evil elementary school teacher when she made the whole class sit detention.
The story is 11 thousand words (approx). I'm looking for gut reactions, obvious mistakes, non-American English usage, and general suggestions.
The story is told from the perspective of an elderly man who is on his deathbed, who makes a shocking confession to his grandson about what happened one fateful night to his evil elementary school teacher when she made the whole class sit detention.
The story is 11 thousand words (approx). I'm looking for gut reactions, obvious mistakes, non-American English usage, and general suggestions.