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Uh... I thought I would make a new thread that came out and directly said what type of novel I'm currently working on... Here's a teaser (if that.. -___-; ):
Silence. I looked around. Nothing. Had I gone blind? Glancing down, I saw my hands before me and knew that wasn’t so. My surroundings were those I had never seen before. It was dark and seemed as though there was nothing around me. Absolutely nothing… Was I left behind in this never-ending darkness? That doesn’t seem right. No… In fact, there is something utterly wrong with this entire situation. Something about this scenario put me on edge yet it eluded my conscious mind. Frantically, I began to run, forcing through the bone-chilling shadows, reaching out for whatever it was I felt that I needed.
My writing style fluctuates to where I sometimes put passive voice in places where it shouldn't be... Not to mention how poorly put together this chapter is so far. How can I know what to keep or toss if I have no one to instruct me? Thus my need for a Mentor expands... v___v;
Silence. I looked around. Nothing. Had I gone blind? Glancing down, I saw my hands before me and knew that wasn’t so. My surroundings were those I had never seen before. It was dark and seemed as though there was nothing around me. Absolutely nothing… Was I left behind in this never-ending darkness? That doesn’t seem right. No… In fact, there is something utterly wrong with this entire situation. Something about this scenario put me on edge yet it eluded my conscious mind. Frantically, I began to run, forcing through the bone-chilling shadows, reaching out for whatever it was I felt that I needed.
My writing style fluctuates to where I sometimes put passive voice in places where it shouldn't be... Not to mention how poorly put together this chapter is so far. How can I know what to keep or toss if I have no one to instruct me? Thus my need for a Mentor expands... v___v;