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YA/New Adult/Adult Romantic Suspense Story

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Peter G

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Hi, I'm looking for a beta reader, for my story, "The Darkest Lie". The protagonist is 19 year old Annie Taylor writing in the first person. It's a WhoDunIt with psychological twists and courtroom suspense.

The Voice:

"I am nineteen now and no longer a girl. I'm a woman in very way that counts. It's not just because of my age, but because of my experiences
too. I don't mean sexual experiences. It's just that I know things I didn't know before. I know about violence and betrayal. And I know the darkest lie of all."

About 60K words. Please let me know. Thank you, Peter
 

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You need to decide if you want it critiqued as a YA, New Adult, OR Adult.

Your reader needs to know which category you think it most fits to be able to offer useful comments on voice, characterization, and such.
 
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