I'm looking for geta readers for the first chapters of my draft (app. 13k).
The story :
During a scavenging session, Prome is hunted by by God's warriors for no apparent reason. When he finally gets back, he discovers that her best friend's mother is a technologist (outlaws by God's orders). They have to flee and discover why they are hunted.
I mainly need to know about the pacing.
If you're interested, send me a pm.
The story :
During a scavenging session, Prome is hunted by by God's warriors for no apparent reason. When he finally gets back, he discovers that her best friend's mother is a technologist (outlaws by God's orders). They have to flee and discover why they are hunted.
I mainly need to know about the pacing.
If you're interested, send me a pm.