Hi!
I'm looking for critique on a chapter (or two) of my YA urban fantasy, someone who could point out any grammatical errors, any idiomatic slips or language issues so that I can determine if I've left any of those in the rest of the novel. I've edited it quite a few times now and can't figure out any other mistakes, so I'm really unsure and could definitely use a fresh pair of eyes, just to make sure I haven't missed anything. I'm willing to do the same for you.
If you'd like to know any details, please PM me. (I'd prefer writers who like to nitpick!)
Thank you!
I'm looking for critique on a chapter (or two) of my YA urban fantasy, someone who could point out any grammatical errors, any idiomatic slips or language issues so that I can determine if I've left any of those in the rest of the novel. I've edited it quite a few times now and can't figure out any other mistakes, so I'm really unsure and could definitely use a fresh pair of eyes, just to make sure I haven't missed anything. I'm willing to do the same for you.
If you'd like to know any details, please PM me. (I'd prefer writers who like to nitpick!
)Thank you!
