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ETA: My story is epic fantasy, so it's setting is similar to middle Iron Age.
In the early chapters of my story, a character who might seem to be shaping up to become a major character gets an arrow fired into his midriff. He then, along with two companions, fights off the attackers.
My problem is two-fold:
1.) After the fight, I have the character (who is a stocky and muscular man) climb onto the back of a mule (with the assistance of his companions). My MC then leads the mule (which is not a riding animal) and the wounded man (who is going into shock, pale-faced, etc.) several miles to town. The other companion runs to bring help. After leading the mule a couple of miles, a wagon arrives with the other companion and an apothecary. They transfer the wounded man from the mule to the back of the wagon, then set off back to the town.
Does the above seem viable?
2.) The wound becomes infected and the man slips into a fever-induced sleep. The apothecary says the outcome could be touch and go, that he can do as much as he can with herbs and poultices, but ultimately the man's survival will depend on his will to live. It could take weeks or longer for him to recover. (This effectively puts him out of the picture, making room for my MC to take his place.)
Does this also sound viable?
Are there areas of the abdomen where being hit with an arrow would be fatal without modern medicine, or abdominal areas that are more 'favourable' for getting an arrow in the gut? I haven't yet gone into detail as to the placement of the arrow - left, right, centre, upper or lower abdomen. Nor do I (or the reader) know which, if any, organ has been penetrated.
Any insight into this would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
In the early chapters of my story, a character who might seem to be shaping up to become a major character gets an arrow fired into his midriff. He then, along with two companions, fights off the attackers.
My problem is two-fold:
1.) After the fight, I have the character (who is a stocky and muscular man) climb onto the back of a mule (with the assistance of his companions). My MC then leads the mule (which is not a riding animal) and the wounded man (who is going into shock, pale-faced, etc.) several miles to town. The other companion runs to bring help. After leading the mule a couple of miles, a wagon arrives with the other companion and an apothecary. They transfer the wounded man from the mule to the back of the wagon, then set off back to the town.
Does the above seem viable?
2.) The wound becomes infected and the man slips into a fever-induced sleep. The apothecary says the outcome could be touch and go, that he can do as much as he can with herbs and poultices, but ultimately the man's survival will depend on his will to live. It could take weeks or longer for him to recover. (This effectively puts him out of the picture, making room for my MC to take his place.)
Does this also sound viable?
Are there areas of the abdomen where being hit with an arrow would be fatal without modern medicine, or abdominal areas that are more 'favourable' for getting an arrow in the gut? I haven't yet gone into detail as to the placement of the arrow - left, right, centre, upper or lower abdomen. Nor do I (or the reader) know which, if any, organ has been penetrated.
Any insight into this would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
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