Hi all.
So I wrote 12K of a MG fantasy, and then my daughter was born, which stopped me writing for a few months.
On returning to writing, I've not been able to get back into it. This is my first real attempt at doing so.
I wondered if anybody would be willing to read 10,980 words, chapter's 2 - 10. (Not happy with chapter 1, but I'll give you an "in short" of it before you get chucked into chapter 2.)
Looking for feedback on whether or not the story is interesting, fun, whether you'd read more and basically everything/anything else.
It's about a non-magic boy who's brother is kidnapped. He tries to save his brother from the wizards.
So, if anybody is interested, let me know
Shibby
So I wrote 12K of a MG fantasy, and then my daughter was born, which stopped me writing for a few months.
On returning to writing, I've not been able to get back into it. This is my first real attempt at doing so.
I wondered if anybody would be willing to read 10,980 words, chapter's 2 - 10. (Not happy with chapter 1, but I'll give you an "in short" of it before you get chucked into chapter 2.)
Looking for feedback on whether or not the story is interesting, fun, whether you'd read more and basically everything/anything else.
It's about a non-magic boy who's brother is kidnapped. He tries to save his brother from the wizards.
So, if anybody is interested, let me know
Shibby
