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Beta readers for first part in epic fantasy series (134K words)

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JackdeNileth

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I've finally finished the first revision of the first book in my series, and although there's certainly more that could be changed (as I've seen by doing a second revision of the first three chapters) I don't see any point in going through all of it again without some input.

So I need some betareaders!
It's the first part in an epic fantasy series and 134K words long (spread over 13 chapters and some interludes).

Be warned that the book includes graphic descriptions of violence and even torture. If that's not your cup of tea, then you'd better refrain from writing me. The book does contain humor and other light-hearted moments, though.

The book is actually only the first half of a story, but I've decided to split it into two, since it has grown much longer than expected. It does have a grand finale, though. As well as a cliffhanger that I could omit, but that'd be kinda boring.


Here's a short synopsis:

~I am the Harbinger of Destruction and it is my fault that all of creation has perished~

A Decaying World tells the story of Drake, a young man who gets pulled into a cosmic game against his will. And it seems, that he has already failed.
But the forces that have set everything into motion give him one more chance, and so the Wheel of Fate begins to turn once more.

Follow Drake on the first part of his journey through the realm of humans, through a vast desert, through ruins of an ancient civilization, until he will ultimately be confronted with a harrowing truth.



If you're interested, send me a message.
I can send you the story as a word, pdf, or mobi file.
 
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