Beta reader sought for 75k. YA lightly multicolored and multigendered fantasy adventure...

I’ve just finished the first book of my duology ‘The Kell Warlock’ (working title). It is a Y.A./Adult fantasy adventure in an alternate world, with a both multicolored and multigendered cast.

It is an adventure story pure and simple, revolving around the female M.C., the Lioness Maud, who is a hefty young warrioress, her lover Jurgis and his twin brother Basil, who is the Warlocky and in great trouble with the Warlockry Council. (Though sex is one of the leit motivs, it is in no way erotica. Should be suitable for everyone over 12 ).

As this is a bit different from what I normally write, I would like a (quick) early beta read to learn how I’m doing.

My main concerns atm are:

- primarily the multicolored/multigendered parts (added Jun30)
also:
- is it a good read?
- is it convincing?
- is the storyline clear?

It’s quite possible I made grammatical mistakes. After all, I’m Dutch, and not writing in my native language. These will be corrected, but at a later stage.

Please pm me if you're interested. Thanks in advance!

NB: I'm really sorry, but no swaps! I hope for someone interested in the subject to pick it up, but I can't return the favor.

To give an idea of the story, I just placed a bit of it in the Fantasy S.Y.W. section.