Advice: Comma Usage

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techwiz18

Hello,

I'm not sure if the following is structured quite right:
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This focus has greatly promoted my software development skills, especially my ability to develop algorithms and debug code.
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Is the usage of the comma correct in this situation?


Thank you for your time and efforts in answering this question.

Sincerely,

Matt
 
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Looks right to me. Soon find out if I'm right or not.
 

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The comma is necessary.

The sentence will make a better impression, however, if it doesn't look so trendy. Too much "me" in it, and is promotion really what happens to skills?
 

techwiz18

Yes, I agree. I'm trying to work out something else that will sound better. Thank you for the advice.
 
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