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Looking for help in writing my non-fiction/memoir query letter/proposal

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I am a fiction writer and this is the first time I have tried non-fiction.
I've been reading about non-fiction queries/proposals and I know there is this gigantic list of items we should present with our query, but some of the items don't make much sense with the type of non-fiction I want to present.

It's not a health book or something that offers a solution to a certain problem, it's a book that collects funny stories that happened in my life.

Do things like a table of contents or platform, etc make much sense when presenting this type of non-fiction?

Do I need a big bio (I don't really have anything interesting to tell them that would add to the book. It's not subject I'm an expert at, it's just funny stories from my life), does a chapter/chapters outlines make sense in this type of non-fiction?

Right now what I have is a hook, I compare it to books of the genre and tell them why I think my should sell and then I say a little something about myself. I would also send sample chapters.
Is this enough, for my type of non fiction?

I am also having some difficulty defining my book. Someone asked me if it was memoirs. Here's what I said: The book is comprised of 24 stories, each one talks about a relationship with a man. It begins with me as a child and my relationship with my father, then a relationship when I was in fourth grade, then stories from teenage years, all the way into adulthood. The book has a chronological order, the theme is always the same. I am not sure if I would call these little stories essays. I am not 100% sure (English is not my native language), though I know the general meaning of essay.

Each story can be read separately, though there are a couple of chapters where I mention someone who has appeared in a previous chapter/story and I do mention my repetive patterns, which the readers will pick up on after reading a bunch of chapters.
Is it a memoir? I'm not sure.

Overall I am SO confused about preparing a query/proposal for my book, I would REALLY appreciate help with this.

Thank you so much!
 

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In this area the first thing to do is pick a publisher--they don't all want every possible thing you can put in a non-fic proposal.
 

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Ohhh, wait! I just saw something that is making me think I have been misinterpreting what the agencies want when you present nonfiction. My book is completely written. From beginning to end.
Is a proposal supposed to be so "full" because most of the nonfiction being presented is not yet written? It's sort of a "map" of what they are thinking of presenting?
And if that is the case, because my book is written from beginning to end already, should I just write a query?
 

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Most nonfiction is not complete when it is sold on proposal. But even in areas where it often is a completed manuscript--you send a proposal if that is their process.
 

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What if there are agencies that don't mention how they want you to submit for nonfiction? Can you send only the query?
 

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The almost always mention something about it somewhere, even if it is just one line. Even if the do not, I would send a query, short proposal, and sample chapter.
 

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I would think your book would come under narrative nonfiction and some agents specialise in this genre.

Even if you have written the entire book that is not how agents sell it. They sell it with the proposal. The proposal is your marketing tool.
If you think of selling nonfiction more as selling an idea or concept rather than selling a completed book, then it's easier to pull it together.

It's taken me a while to get my head round it, particularly with agents who only want a query letter. Your query letter has to be strong. The query letter (if that's all they accept) sells the proposal and the proposal sells the idea. Then they examine your writing style. Then... who knows.

My first query letters were rubbish, but I worked and worked on it. Yesterday, although it may not seem much, I got a response from an agent saying that my current mss was not for them (their nonfiction is a little lighter so I expected it) but if I'd got anything in future that I deemed suitable then they would like me to query again.

Not bad from a query letter for nonfiction. See, the 'idea' wasn't suitable, but the query told them I knew what I was doing with regard to nonfiction.

Pull together a really strong query letter and work on the proposal, no matter what happens you are going to have to do it at some point.

Oh, and when it comes down to 'not being an expert' try selling from the perspective of 'life experiences' and put your own slant on it - what makes you different?
 
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