In one of my current WIPs, my MCs, a trio of college girls, are presented with radically different (and pretty unsettling) religious-based origin of the universe and nature of the afterlife.
One of the girls is pretty superficial and shallow and worldly and has never given much thought to religious matters.
Another is a bit more sophisticated and is kind of generically spiritual but not subscribing to any particular religious view.
The third is a practicing Roman Catholic but isn't hardcore and doesn't take everything so seriously. She's into weird fiction like cosmological horror stories, and she's convinced her city is some sort of weirdness epicenter.
My problem is the characters seem to take this new information remarkably well and even joke around a bit (regarding something unrelated) during the scene. It's only later, when they and a new doctor acquaintance (who was also in on the meeting) are sitting in a restaurant that the Catholic girl looks noticeably worried and starts a conversation about how this new knowledge has affected each of them. I created this restaurant setting as a place where, throughout the series, the girls can meet to relax, unwind, formulate strategies, and discuss other things. This scene will probably be the last scene of this particular story, and I think it'd be appropriate for it to end on a downer like this, but I'm wondering if anyone would wonder why the girls take so long to react emotionally. I didn't want to interrupt the previous scene until stuff that sets up future stories is gone through, but would it be realistic behavior for these girls to not have immediate reactions?
One of the girls is pretty superficial and shallow and worldly and has never given much thought to religious matters.
Another is a bit more sophisticated and is kind of generically spiritual but not subscribing to any particular religious view.
The third is a practicing Roman Catholic but isn't hardcore and doesn't take everything so seriously. She's into weird fiction like cosmological horror stories, and she's convinced her city is some sort of weirdness epicenter.
My problem is the characters seem to take this new information remarkably well and even joke around a bit (regarding something unrelated) during the scene. It's only later, when they and a new doctor acquaintance (who was also in on the meeting) are sitting in a restaurant that the Catholic girl looks noticeably worried and starts a conversation about how this new knowledge has affected each of them. I created this restaurant setting as a place where, throughout the series, the girls can meet to relax, unwind, formulate strategies, and discuss other things. This scene will probably be the last scene of this particular story, and I think it'd be appropriate for it to end on a downer like this, but I'm wondering if anyone would wonder why the girls take so long to react emotionally. I didn't want to interrupt the previous scene until stuff that sets up future stories is gone through, but would it be realistic behavior for these girls to not have immediate reactions?