So, in the short story I'm writing, my main character is detained by a police officer for drunkenly fighting in the street with another guy. When he is forced onto the ground and cuffed, he gets angry and mouths off to the cop because he was defending himself from the other guy and feels like he's being punished unjustly. The cop loses his cool a little because of what my MC says and when he pulls him up by the handcuffs, he does it so roughly that it dislocates my MC's shoulder.
As of right now, I have it written that the cop responsible for dislocating the shoulder, nervous about what he's done, chooses to ignore the issue altogether hoping that he can just say that my MC must have dislocated it himself while struggling in the back of the cop car or something.
Would this fly? If not, what would happen after this?
I've been doing a lot of searching online but I can't find a specific answer anywhere.
He's also rather bloody because of the fight that he had just been in, but his nose isn't broken or anything.
Either way, when he's checked into the station and put into the drunk tank, wouldn't someone else notice and take action?
Any help is very, very appreciated!
As of right now, I have it written that the cop responsible for dislocating the shoulder, nervous about what he's done, chooses to ignore the issue altogether hoping that he can just say that my MC must have dislocated it himself while struggling in the back of the cop car or something.
Would this fly? If not, what would happen after this?
I've been doing a lot of searching online but I can't find a specific answer anywhere.
He's also rather bloody because of the fight that he had just been in, but his nose isn't broken or anything.
Either way, when he's checked into the station and put into the drunk tank, wouldn't someone else notice and take action?
Any help is very, very appreciated!
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